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drift- a small little burst
hank

what a lovely life
 1
birds flapping
 2
hah!
 3
bullshit!
 4
see them
 5
Drift!
 6
(in front of a back-sunlit-bluey-cushion)
 7
see them pause in midair
 8
see them float
 9
mock
 10
laugh
 11
they do not fly
 12
insects fly
 13
birds swim
 14
like fish
 15
in the sky
 16

26 Jun 07


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14-16 silly but i love it .

fiddler crab
figure eight puffer
 — unknown

Thank you for your poem. I enjoyed the picture it painted
 — Jagdog

yea no kidding they do... amazing... huh.... I like.
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