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the man in the green sweat
shirt drove the tractor towing
the green tub uphill
though i was not there
to see the journey i saw
the arrival
the man
in the green sweatshirt got
out and gave copious water
to a hanging basket
on a rainy day and rewound
his hose only to tractor again
towing the tub downhill
and a moment later a large green
truck passed with white letters
spelling 'wiseman'

16 Jul 07

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