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hank

the man in the green sweat
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shirt drove the tractor towing
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the green tub uphill
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though i was not there
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to see the journey i saw
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the arrival
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the man
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in the green sweatshirt got
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out and gave copious water
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to a hanging basket
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on a rainy day and rewound
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his hose only to tractor again
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towing the tub downhill
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and a moment later a large green
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truck passed with white letters
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spelling 'wiseman'
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16 Jul 07

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the line breaks drive me crazy and, besides that, I don't have anything to say.
 — amaviena

you should take a break from those lines.
 — hank

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