"this town works like clockwork"
twenty four hours later
proved him right
2 Aug 07
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hank poem, nice
thanks. am i becoming catagorized? 'this one is stupid and simplistic-let's file that under 'hank poem''?
not that it matters. i'd be flattered to cause someone to open a new folder with my name on it.
i want to add to this, but just dont know how.
what made it prove him right?
i mean other than the obvious 24 hours/day/clockwork thing. what about the town? bring some other detail in. a tiny one.. something bigger would ruin it.
I agree with yellow bird- what about the town?
where's your penis?
the town? the town's still the same.
nice and doesn't it (apparantly)!
nice little epigram or graffiti on the walls of poem-paii.
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