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innocent sun
hank

over the earth like a wave
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the sun rolls
 2
or maybe it crawls edges
 3
over the world tentatively
 4
these days
 5
but the sun breaks
 6
bringing debris
 7
hubris of human breath
 8
each morning the sun wakes
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millions of planes and people
 10
cars and trains and breathing start
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lawnmowers planes tractors atv's
 12
the sun is a wave pushing
 13
a dirty cloud
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11 Aug 07

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Exactly.  very clear statement.  I think I would space it out more if I were you.  
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