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innocent sun

over the earth like a wave
the sun rolls
or maybe it crawls edges
over the world tentatively
these days
but the sun breaks
bringing debris
hubris of human breath
each morning the sun wakes
millions of planes and people
cars and trains and breathing start
lawnmowers planes tractors atv's
the sun is a wave pushing
a dirty cloud

11 Aug 07

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