interesting choice of syntax, implicatives and structure makes it so hard to follow that i love it. — MattPat
mattpat. thanks. mat, pat. boy girl. boy boy. pat a mat or mat a pat. if someone is patting could you throw a matt over them? like putting out a fire?
interesting choice of name. will now click on you. — hank
well mattpat, i got through three of your poems, maybe four and all i can say is ugh. — hank
yes ... a shedding in the structure of the poem, and we the reader are drying our wings for flight... nice! — AlchemiA
dull and repetitive.
13 and 14 are more where its at...but it is mostly annoying. — DeformedLion