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re: luciano and his sister-in-law's unoccupied lycra
netskyIam

nothing  wrong with kissing thongs
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if that gives hope unto the tongue
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in lieu of what it really longs
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for
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should it be for us to swear
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others off others' underwear?
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29 Sep 07

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I have been studiously avoiding this but I give in. This is so perversely funny!
 — erato

its really gay if u ask me but well done anyway
 — unknown

Luciano and his underwear fetish are both real.  He's an Argentine and primarily gay, but flares for his sister in law's thongs.   People are funny in sexy ways, and so the little verse should reflect that fact, that we are all comedies ourselves, scripted by our hormones.
 — netskyIam

HAHAHA!  I guess no one ever knows what anyone else is really thinking (or doing!).
 — Isabelle5

How is he gay if he's getting off sniffing women stuff?
 — Isabelle5

I THINK YOU MIGHT LIKE TO ADD A COMMA AFTER LUCIANO FOR REASONS OF A STRAINING REASON
 — chuckle_s

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