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11 Oct 07

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well i had to read that twice.
 — aerol

            ;          &nbs p;          &nb sp;          &n bsp;          & nbsp;                       ;          &nbs p;          &nb sp;          &n bsp;          & nbsp;                       ;     i think this poem is wonderfully illustrated and achieves a brilliant balance of foreground, middle ground and background. the composition is unique and its sense of scale is monumental. the play of light and shadow delights and the application of the medium is aggressive. the choice of subject matter is universal, yet personal, and the overall effect is aesthetically sophisticated.
On another note when can i see
the picture of your sisters pussy ?
 — unknown

^^^What was THAT comment about?
I don't know what is really being said here.
Is this an attempt at senryu?  Haiku?
Hmm... it's escaping me.
 — aforbing

There seem to be a lot missing, more than my mind wants to fill in.
 — Isabelle5

ha.
nicely done.
 — varun

wow.
 — hank

Treasure!
 — themolly

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