|bless the women
bless the women who show the men how to mend and love again
25 Oct 07
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bless all women, and then fuck them beautifully.
i give you an eleven for this treasure of a poem.
worthy of sticking to a car bumper
car bumper, can you make one please?
if only your message board posts showed this brevity and sensitivity - short, insightful, and very good.
nice one, reid.
break it in two after men?
For some reason I really like this.
I am impressed by how it reads as well, you use 'men' 3 times in one line...I like how it doesn't even feel repetetive.
is the opposite true?
darned if you all aren't seers, getting all the nuances that I did not consciously put into the line.
It was formed intuitively.
Banditfemme was the particular muse, and is, and always will be that
to all of us.
"break it in two after men?
— varun "
Thanks varun (thank you all)
I considered that---but no, see, I see it as a simple, spoken, single line.
All together now, that sort of thing; why break? So that's why not.
Thanks for such thoughts. All are a help.
A beauty, nutsky. Well done. I also agree with first and *especially* the third 'unknown'. :)
indeed. rare is the woman who loves, rather than seeking to be loved.
rare is the woman who loves without an agenda
^I've yet to meet one, or a man. I know! I shall become a person of Love!
It is time for you to apologize for all the damage you have done here at PC and promise to stop abusing the message board once and for all.
However ill & twisted your thought processes have become, you need to stand up and take responsibility for your appalling behavior now, Reid.
Until you are human being enough to do that and stop your spamming, I shall give everything of yours a 1.
^The poetry nazi's have arrived. He can do what he wants. Worry about yourself.
i would love it if 'mend' was 'darn'. thanks, holey sock is my new efemmeral name.