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lake
hank

night float morning rise
 1
thick fog feel way
 2
surface still body waving
 3
hair slick threads sink
 4
down
 5
dockside when i was young
 6
i measured all that
 7

12 Nov 07

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no i in 7?

nice poem, hank.
 — varun

ending needs a more worthy poem
 — poetbill

you need to find your place, little billy boy.
 — unknown

prefer to wander
 — poetbill

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