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bathe
hank

step in blood
 1
rushes like kids to balloons
 2
deliberate harsh am i
 3
to myself but also
 4
caringly complete and
 5
i do all of me
 6
but it is with the left foot
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that i always begin
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21 Nov 07

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nice poem
 — varun

  evil :)
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