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be quick
netskyIam

the great thing about Justin is that he never wallows in his pasts
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that can't be changed, and he never dwells on the presents
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that he can't keep, and he never worries about the future
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that somehow does not match his pasts, nor this present
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that he does not believe that he deserves; just to be
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sure that Justin does, this is all of the purchase
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that Justin requires: enough aa cells to power
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the jumps of a nimble mind jack
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running on strong for life.
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25 Nov 07

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Mr NeskyIam you have some explaining to do, at least i hope you do.
 — unknown

Only my mother calls me "Mr NetskyIam".   Are you my mother?
I did not think so, but you sure do sound like her.
 — netskyIam

this is quite jerry and you've said some very important things in this about the government's inhibiting tax structures in south carolina. signed, mel gibson
 — joey

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