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the needs and wants of sometimes

i once picked her
up and as she
entered my car
the song "you
can't always
get what you
want" by the
rolling stones.
i can't get what
i want but the speaker
reminds me sometimes
i get what i need
well i don't know
what i need
i just know
what i want

9 Dec 07

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The poetry I like is about describing relationships (between things, people, events, etc.) using rhythmic language.

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