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the needs and wants of sometimes
bear

i once picked her
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up and as she
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entered my car
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the song "you
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can't always
 5
get what you
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want" by the
 7
rolling stones.
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i can't get what
 9
i want but the speaker
 10
reminds me sometimes
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i get what i need
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well i don't know
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what i need
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i just know
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what i want
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9 Dec 07

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The poetry I like is about describing relationships (between things, people, events, etc.) using rhythmic language.

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