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netskyIam

http://tinyurl.com/3bpgd9
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(copy and paste.  it's two minutes long)
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thanks.
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17 Dec 07

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thats 2 minutes of my life that i'll NEVER get back
 — smcyrone

netsky has finally cracked up
 — unknown

Good ending, but too much nothing getting there... first 95% reminded me of my last boss.
 — poetbill

Apparently for some reason sound on youtube doesn't work on my computer, but I really really like the concept of a 'video poem', so you get kudos for that, and the concept of posting video poems, I think I might try that too.
 — SenorSin

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