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What's a Weeden?
netskyIam

item pertains to a youtube video just made by the author,
of an antique toy engine, just run for the first time ever.
Video here:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nMi0HLmh2DI


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What's a Weeden?
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It's a toy in every way but attitude:
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a hot and dirty spittle spewing tinplate tantrum
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raring to go again to make as much fuss as possible
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while doing the least amount of work
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imaginable
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In other words
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it is so much like me
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I think we must be tin kin
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9 Jan 08


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