cinnamon, vanilla, sweat
dry pine crackeling,
nothing to come-
14 Jan 04
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I like the way you make the reader's eyes move about the page.
Short lines, few words and yet so very strong. Great!
Romantic and smells like sex in here.
*sigh* I like it...makes me remember those moments where I thought "I wish time wouldn't run out"
i like it, you get right to your point kindof a romantic like she said...nice job
didnt mean to post anonymously my bad^^
indeed alluring! so apt - 'except time' & how it has been emphasized sounds cool & sexy
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