- well I've a few cats and, well, they, ah, like climbing trees and, well, you know the birds are there, then well, you see where I'm going with this - but definitely a floating image - I remember a racket and leaves and birds and cats and feathers all floating surreal like in a tree -
i have seen feather floating in thin air but not sliding from a leaf or something ;(
maybe write in the eyes rather than the question mark.
enjoyable and provokes some thought...
yey, thanks alchemia for the image.
trochee, your time will come.
deformedlion, i don't quite understand what you mean.
and poetbill, thank you.
how many times in your life
does a feather
before your eyes
is it me or have these ghost hands
touched? feel the sparks
like spring in december
or the kraken in your bed,
slime wriggles from your head.
the birds shaving in the branches, sans
sharp sticks can make you bleed,
the tree, the tree!
it has nice thighs,
and golden hair, and bird shit
And the feathers are all
misaligned.; my crown
sorry for that, but i felt like it.
:D don't fight the feeling, dear!
I once saw a feather floating through my pee in the back of The Odeon when i entered a best dressed bird competition drank 17 pints of "Soar Like An Eagle " extra super strength lager and spent the rest of the night pissing through my feathers.
Larry wet suit Lark
excellent observational poem which makes me think of the minutia of life
charming, larry. that's real charming. maybe you should write a poem about it.
thanks for your excellent observation.
An interesting image. An interesting thought. Would like to see this expanded.
expanded.. i'm thinking thinking thinking about it. help me out?
expanded...maybe a lot of feathers?
Maybe an entire chicken.
with two side dishes?