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gale
hank

blows the hair of rising tide straightslick back
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but stillwater forehead swimsurges
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and sheep depending on orientation
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appear cloaked
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collared royalty portraits
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or like pretty poodledogs
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19 Mar 08

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hahehehehhahah. i like it very much. too perfect in the way you've married words to get the full effect.

nice
 — tiedtoes

Nice!! Ugene
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