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on finding his shoes gone
Rynne

When you leave
 1
there’s a hollow place left,
 2
a phantom indentation
 3
like fingers held against my skin
 4
and then lifted away.
 5

23 Mar 08

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cute, however i am unsure of the last line.
 — raskolniikov

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