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mantra 1
hank

itrymybestinanygivensituation
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27 Mar 08

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It is indeed a mantra, but it doesn't translate to a poem, in my opinion.
 — Isabelle5

i
try
my
best
in
anygiven
suatuation.
 — DeformedLion

maybe add more - for now the line works - stumbled over the beginning, makes for a longer read then. whats the significance of mantra "1" ?
 — adonispillow

if this is a mantra, i'll take the metro to the zoo and talktotheanimals.
 — unknown

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