The wide-eyed yearling
leaped the stone wall to deep woods—
my heart sailed with her.
15 Apr 08
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very nice :)
Really nice. Says so much to an old fool like wot i am who can't even look at a stone wall no more let alone jump one.
Larry sailing in his dreams Lark
Not to worry Larry. The poem can be read as is, or as metaphor--readers choice. Thanks for the comment.
read this one both ways.
glad you made it this way. always nice to read such things.
So very well done.
Haiku about nature, how unusual to find that here! This is good, it has a very strong finish. Little saying much.
Way to go, Paul!
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