| every passing glow
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unknown
| every passing glow | 1 |
of headlights on the wall | 2 |
assumes somehow | 3 |
the shape of you | 4 |
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and every bit of white | 5 |
that clings on as you | 6 |
slide on into the night | 7 |
is me somehow | 8 |
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Sweet sadness.
— themolly
kind of a funny snake-along, turning back and forth, the way you've worded this. that's all that really interests me in this though. it's a private thought for one person and doesn't play well in a big hall. i hope this works for whomever you wrote it though. i'd be very pleased to get it, but probably the whomever doesn't even like poetry. we always hook up with crypto-neanderthals.
— joey
ha ha ha joey. that was funny
— themolly
a powerful, unique image.
— unknown
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