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key stroke
hank

i is the right
 1
middle finger
 2

i like that. this is where it stays.
i should give this to glen.

10 Jun 08

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possibly, the combination of the two -- talic and i talic -- makes this taloc-A and tlactbleoid, in the definition of Prbosk? i think it does make this a modern poem -- the text in rigorous angled font is insipid on its own, and yet, with the slanted font, seems gay... in the sense that people use it now-a-days -- "not transactional".
 — joey

thanks joey for your lisp.
 — hank

funny, because G is the left index finger
 — Cerulise

well, thanks for the mammeries.
 — joey

yeah, exactly. the memories. the musings.
 — hank

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.................... ./... ./ /
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 — sir_I_clan

ahh, there's my favourite finger.
 — jenakajoffer

Ooh, typing class poetry!  haha  

I've been seeing that italicized stuff on poems here, not sure if it's a message or a continuation of the poem.  
 — Isabelle5

i should rename this. 'i' is the 'right middle finger'...come on. that's fucking good.
i should rename this.
 — hank

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