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section4
| I tongue twist tender project-shun | 1 |
of a hollow hole meant for | 2 |
the bite-in, not for the fight-in, | 3 |
Let me abra-cadabra my way | 4 |
into your heart by the mention | 5 |
of pro-fan-witty as I hand gesture | 6 |
my love with the wrong finger | 7 |
into your soul; black spots best | 8 |
left unwise as to why your | 9 |
cries mean less today than | 10 |
yes; Tess-Day....( a mistake). | 11 |
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She lies that Sin-co-mated | 12 |
beats lead to the conclusion | 13 |
that event-duality was a | 14 |
certain-tea served cold | 15 |
to taste buds honed on | 16 |
rapid fire; as the we | 17 |
became I on nights | 18 |
and her on others. | 19 |
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Realized that the dick-tionary | 20 |
holds hidden meanings for | 21 |
those who wait to see | 22 |
the light while staring at | 23 |
letters without glasses | 24 |
as I freak out inside of you, | 25 |
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And Behold! | 26 |
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Marriage spelt correctly | 27 |
spells the mirage that has | 28 |
become our late night | 29 |
escape-ads and my | 30 |
early morning hang-over | 31 |
her. | 32 |
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I guess it's love. | 33 |
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— section4
Wow
— themolly
That was pretty sick :) I like it a lot.
— technomancer
You've really put your finger on something here
— unknown
section4/fractalbore
— unknown
Thank you molly and technomancer and first unknown.
As for the second unknown, I am honored that you thought I was fractalcore ( I love his style and he is a great poet). Sadly I am nothing more than simple section4; an entity on my own.....sorry I bored you.
— section4
i love this, good job.
— JL
Thanks JL.
— section4
very slick
— Thirteen
thanks thirteen.
— section4
hi, section4.
very nice moves here which i'd say very much your own but i can
somehow see myself there, too. a person can only be himself in what-
ever he does or he'll be crappy like the fruits of his labor. only you can
do a piece like this.
but emulation?
i guess it's the highest form of compliment.
hope you stay healthy, honest and fair in the PC arena.
: )
— fractalcore
...i'd say are* very much you own...
: )
— fractalcore
Hey fractalcore,
You can say that I learned from the best. Hope you don't mind me borrowing techniques and stuff, this is a wicked style and I absolutely love it.
Keep up th good work.
Thanks for reading.
— section4
no problem really. what i was trying to tell you
was that you're developing your own style even
if it has similarities with the one you're emulating.
thank you for your appreciation.
: )
— fractalcore
and i must add that you should read the works of
the old poets here or the ones mentioned in AN
HE-MALE KING DAMN[ED]. they can give you a lot
of inspiration, too.
: )
— fractalcore
ABCD...
fractalcore
All this is who-what?
Better be good or i will
Call the autorities
Dead meat ones, twice, thrice
Even
Four times
Gawdamnit!
Hate
Is
Just
Killing
Lots of
Men
Not to mention we-men
Over a short
Pukin' Period of
Quintissential
Rudeness --
Shall we all
Talk not just to be nice but with
Utmost care and understanding too?
Veer a-
Way from
X-plicit childishness; end the
Youth-is-lost-in-me-and-i-can't-be-a-child-other-than-childish
Zeal.
5, 6, 7, 8, 9
zero into it,
us, you, and i.
written 06/15/08
t6hank you so much, section4.
: )
— fractalcore
quintessential*
sorry.
: )
— fractalcore
You're welcome fc.
Veer a-
Way from
X-plicit childishness; end the
Youth-is-lost-in-me-and-i-can't-be-a-child-other-than-childish
Zeal.
That's what I'm talkin' about. Good stuff.
— section4
should be the case, huh?
: )
— fractalcore
Love it.
— wasp
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