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chimney (fourth out of 5)

i looked up at the summer dusk sky	1
it was blue	2
i am chimney black	3
and i said 'thank you	4
what a good day'	5
and then chuckled but then	6
said it again seriously	7

16 Jun 08

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I Love You.
— p_p_love

thank you. i'll take you seriously until i am convinced otherwise.
— hank

that particular day must have extended its hand out to you. it's a pleasant thing to hold hands through life.
— bettalpha

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