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chimney (fourth out of 5)
hank

i looked up at the summer dusk sky
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it was blue
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i am chimney black
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and i said 'thank you
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what a good day'
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and then chuckled but then
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said it again seriously
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16 Jun 08

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I Love You.
 — p_p_love

thank you. i'll take you seriously until i am convinced otherwise.
 — hank

that particular day must have extended its hand out to you. it's a pleasant thing to hold hands through life.
 — bettalpha
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