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chimney (fourth out of 5)

i looked up at the summer dusk sky
it was blue
i am chimney black
and i said 'thank you
what a good day'
and then chuckled but then
said it again seriously

16 Jun 08

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I Love You.
 — p_p_love

thank you. i'll take you seriously until i am convinced otherwise.
 — hank

that particular day must have extended its hand out to you. it's a pleasant thing to hold hands through life.
 — bettalpha