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i see two old people
i'm walking behind two elderly folks
they stare into a skip
they peer into a dumpster
just like i would and do
look into a mountain pond
or a spring puddle

25 Jun 08

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i dont like it. and it donset make much sense.
 — pumpkinfetch

well said.
 — hank

i do. and it dose.
 — stout

I like this, h. Simply clever and real.
 — unknown