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urbanity
hank

i see two old people
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i'm walking behind two elderly folks
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they stare into a skip
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they peer into a dumpster
 4
just like i would and do
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look into a mountain pond
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or a spring puddle
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25 Jun 08


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i dont like it. and it donset make much sense.
 — pumpkinfetch

well said.
 — hank

i do. and it dose.
 — stout

I like this, h. Simply clever and real.
 — unknown

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