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into the deep blue night
Inuki

fragrant lychee blossoms
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fill the stale air,
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wafting over the field
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of dried and deserted
 4
chamomile.
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at night we don
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crumbling masks of superiority,
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sliding ring-tipped shaman fingers
 8
through scraggly hair,
 9
weaving ink into air,
 10
wrestling bamboo shoots,
 11
like placid placebos.
 12
 
 
unwrap your plastic hair
 13
from the mass
 14
of cellophane souls;
 15
the crucifix is alight
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with LEDs,
 17
and in homage
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to the cursed,
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a thousand men
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each cracks
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a glowstick to life -
 22
a tidal wave of tears
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erupting on the ocean's surface
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like beaded molten fireflies.
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molting and mating intertwine,
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a liquid viper
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spills a second degree burn
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across my shoulders;
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gold leaf flutters
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around my face.
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i grow statuesque,
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chiseled,
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my toga trails into
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the deep blue night.
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goodbye cacophony,
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Arthur Miller hangs himself
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by his own intestines
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in a pile of manure.
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i sit and rot
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in a storage shed,
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though i am more human
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than you can ever hope to be.
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1 Jul 08

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