| L-oo-k at me Please (you)
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section4
| Can't explain why I had | 1 |
to be everything you wanted | 2 |
me to become without | 3 |
sounding un-sung lyric-ally | 4 |
like someone's un-done | 5 |
romance with being your | 6 |
mom's best son while | 7 |
at-tempting to get some; | 8 |
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Flush before you leave | 9 |
your pride floating in-candy | 10 |
-scent-ly for someone | 11 |
else to poke fun and | 12 |
treat you like you're | 13 |
not here to mock their | 14 |
done while he examines | 15 |
how to use your broken | 16 |
spine's drum and | 17 |
exhale-your-gasped | 18 |
protests with praise | 19 |
sung dumb leaving you | 20 |
half numb but feeling | 21 |
full-filled after being | 22 |
screwed under the sun. | 23 |
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Praise you for making | 24 |
me a tool in your | 25 |
life's dreams as I bitter | 26 |
and tre(m)ble intern-aly | 27 |
and ex-press myself | 28 |
to wife and kids with | 29 |
insecurity; watch me | 30 |
self-destructibly loathe | 31 |
me to fullest and love | 32 |
you unconditionally and | 33 |
raise my son to please | 34 |
thee and live terrified | 35 |
of becoming me. | 36 |
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3 Jul 08 |
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I really enjoyed reading this.
— technomancer
thanks technomancer
— section4
x-sell-lent right.
eye halved nah-thing left two say.
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— fractalcore
Ewe right such g(oo)d poetry, (ewe.)
— starr
thanks fc and starr, always a play-sure to read you comma-mints.
— section4
nice poem.
— hank
heard stuff like this outside of highschool. How is this the number 1 recent best...
— SeanConnery
Cool wordplay.
— nugunz
Thanks nugunz.
And Sean Connery do you mean highschool or highs-school? Must have heard the same stuff I heard out of high school cause that's when I picked it up.
(that and half my annoyingly immature personality traits) Thanks for reading.
— section4
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