| In Your Orbit
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dreamergirl
| I love the light | 1 |
streaming through the window | 2 |
and landing on your face, | 3 |
the colour of peace. | 4 |
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I love your gaze - | 5 |
the way it follows me, | 6 |
the way I can feel it | 7 |
even when I turn around, | 8 |
the presence of your eyes. | 9 |
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I love your hands, | 10 |
their cool touch on my arm, | 11 |
how my cheek tingles | 12 |
when you brush your fingertips against it. | 13 |
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I love the calm that | 14 |
washes over me | 15 |
every time I look at you. | 16 |
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I love your voice, | 17 |
I always have - | 18 |
it finds me in the quietest moments, | 19 |
and soothes my broken heart. | 20 |
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3 Jul 08 |
Rated 8.3 (8.3) by 5 users.
Active (5): 6, 8, 9, 10
Inactive (0): 8
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Comments:
8.5!!! Very romantic :)
— Alvida24
So beautiful! A calming moment in a mad world - I can only hope that someone feels the same way about me - rock on!
— the_lost_one
Thank you both!
— dreamergirl
Awwwwwwwww. Very sweet, very romantic, VERY lovingly written and it isn't even Valentine's Day! :-) I'd break after L's 4, 9, 13 & 16 for added and beneficial effect of white space.
— starr
Thanks, starr! I tried it out and I definitely like the breaks better, it seems a lot less blocky
— dreamergirl
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