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lotus
hank

sitproperly
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andyourheartbeat
 2
willoscillateyourbody
 3
likeaflaglesspole
 4
inabreeze
 5

5 Aug 08

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...AUM...
: )
 — fractalcore

"innavacuum"
 — joey

suggestingatitlejoey?
 — hank

I enjoyed this poem and returned to it multiple times. Is it in the shape of a pennant?
 — Joseph

Stupid.
 — wasp

oscillating wildly :)

i like the way the words are almost tucked into one another... like petals on a flower perhaps :)
 — Mongrol

how zen
 — unknown

inbreeze?

nice poem.

hello hank.
 — varun

sacrebleu. spine shakingly good
 — stout

thankstout.
 — hank

likes this.
 — gnormal

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