cats ask for food and get it or else
cats need not apologize for anything
cats are women without
dogs are little men, big men, silly men
champions, protectors, opportunistic
thieves of hearts and unattended chicken
livers, observers, noble wretches, sloppy
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men are like dogs, stupid and loyal.
women are like cats, independent, sleek and quite happy shacking up with whoever feeds them the best cuts.
myself, i prefer the unpredictability of cats.
sorry, i forgot to add. i like how you broke the poem up into 2 halves.
NICELY LISTED OBSERVATION BUT I WONDER IF THERE IS ENOUGH ENERGY LEFT HERE FOR TO ADD SOMETHING MORE THAN JUST OBSERVATION? A MORAL, A POINT, HOW CATS AND DOGS WILL FOREVER BICKER YET EVER NEED EACHOTHER IN ONE FASHION OR OTHER. AS IT IS, IT JUST SEEMS AS THOUGH YOU MADE YOUR STATEMENT, THEN LEFT THE ROOM BEFORE ANYONE HAD A CHANCE TO RETORT; SOMEWHAT DISAPPOINTING WAY TO COMMUNICATE.
I'D SUGGEST TO ALTER THE DOG AREA SLIGHTLY FOR A PERHAPS GREATER EFFECT WITH A TOUCH MORE SWEEP...
ALTHOUGH opportunistic MIGHTN'T WORK SO WELL IN SUCH A CASE, BUT THEN, MEBBE YOU AIN'T DONE HERE YET ANYHOW.
I leave the new poem for the readers to finish as they see best.
Make up, tongued empaths, make up....
Ooh a kitty! Can I hold it, aw it nuzzled me!
Ooh a doggie, will he bite?
like it a lot
this is a good
example of the
that really doesn't
the implication is of
the 'cat is
no regard nor
and bereft of a 'human'
likeness, and then ascribe
this to women.
yet the dog is
champion, a sympathetic
this is a bad
model based on
lack of any
real understanding of
women as human, or cat
the man is a poor wretch,
a victim of his own
heart and nature,
and women are cruel
givers, and souless.
very poor poetry, and
this is good because of the cat stuff.