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fractalcore
| the announcement is a hoax — | 1 |
they're actually selling cat | 2 |
humerus stuffed with herb | 3 |
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and you're not s'posed to | 4 |
light the damn thing up | 5 |
nor leave with it. | 6 |
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but you leave and live | 7 |
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anyway. | 8 |
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we | 9 |
all | 10 |
do. | 11 |
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for PrudIsDaWay.
written 07/15/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/49481/
thanks, PrudIsDaWay.
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15 Aug 08 |
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thanks for the fave, nisetru.
any thoughts on the piece?
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— fractalcore
the title certainly grabbed my attention and I knew it would be your iconic iconoclastic word play -- criss-cross'd my shoulder bone to my elbow while trying to say the BuddhaDharmaSangha -- ya' know the femer is often made into a horn and blown to scare away the hungry ghosts -- I think they like to dance the night away -- l7 to 11 is the way
— AlchemiA
well then ghosts should learn to honk-to-munch so we
won't have to cripple someone or some cat to horn them
away and argue whether cats really have 9 lives or not
and if we humans really just have one life.
cats do humor us often, don't they?
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— fractalcore
thanks, btw, sir AlchemiA.
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— fractalcore
For Gods sake, write something we can all understand except for you and your croonies.
— wasp
hi, wasp.
sorry about that; it's a problem i can't seem to address
but thanks for taking the time to read.
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— fractalcore
fractal~you is just Fee wine as ewe bee
— Liliana
hi, Lily.
thank you for always taking the time to read.
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— fractalcore
cat humerus stuffed with herb...
that's great.
i'd suggest that 7 would breathe and 8 could grow, were 8 planted atop 9.
just a thought.
nice
— chuckle_s
good idea, chuckle_s.
but how 'bout i let "anyway" breathe on its own?
there.
what do you think?
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— fractalcore
it's all good
— chuckle_s
thanks, dude.
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— fractalcore
hooray for "s'posed"
i will roll around in this often, it is that good. thizzshanks.
— onklcrispy
a very great pleasure to have onklcrispy's
comments here. thank you for stopping by, sir.
that's the new new jezuss pose, i s'pose, hehe.
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— fractalcore
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