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Highland Games (edited)
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Rhinos stomp in skirts
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and trainers; hardcore shreks
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tossing their cabers. Humping
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chunks from off their shoulders;
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hurling hammers, heaving boulders.
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Sweating porridge, belching banzais
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'Wordsworth', watches, shrunk to fun-sized;
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scribbling pictures as they thrust; painted with
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my blunderbuss.
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27 Aug 08

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  a cute limerick that made me smirk
 — AlchemiA

cheers, Alc :)
 — unknown

Have also reformatted but am having trouble with the punctuation. Any help would be much appreciated. cheers :)
 — unknown

hahaha!  Is Mor participating?
 — Isabelle5

Mor is everywhere. :)
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