| Decision Never Made
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Isabelle5
| Saturdays, sadly, were our fight nights; | 1 |
we entertained our lesbian neighbors | 2 |
with our shouts and screams - | 3 |
they laughingly said they could listen best | 4 |
from their bathroom window. | 5 |
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Little did I know that one dark-haired beauty | 6 |
dreamed I’d leave you, come to live with her. | 7 |
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Her hand shockingly intimate | 8 |
on my thigh one night | 9 |
told me all she could not say. | 10 |
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Your sudden appearance in the room | 11 |
and your hand hard on her shoulder | 12 |
told her all she needed to know. | 13 |
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Neither of you asked my opinion; | 14 |
I am left to wonder. | 15 |
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27 Aug 08 |
Rated 9.3 (9.3) by 3 users.
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ahh -- yeah those are life changing moments -- here you've captivated the reader with just enough -- perhaps the last line would best be imagined in wonder by the reader after all -- nevertheless a good pome!
— AlchemiA
and I like the title without the year Isabelle5 -- did not know this was you as I voiced a male throughout -- nice write
— AlchemiA
Oh, haha! You thought it was a guy being vamped by a lesbian? That's definitely how a man would want this to read! haha
— Isabelle5
Wow. Very craftily confusing. It leaves a lot of room for the character's identities to be figured out by the reader. I would say that it's written in the voice of a woman, only because most straight men aren't very poetically inclined.
— starr
that was you, isabelle?;)
good write.
s.
— unknown
Yeah, s, almost got a convert! haha not really!
— Isabelle5
ha...didn't think so:(
— unknown
You'd be the first to know...wink
— Isabelle5
i won't hold my breath to hear that news...it's never going to happen;)
s
— unknown
I hope not! I like men too much!
— Isabelle5
I bet you're a smart person--that is resonated throughout the poem. That doesn't mean however you can write poetry. Reference either Edgar Allen Poe or myself for pointers. I have another username as well...Henry. I write in the style of Poe. 8/10
— Poe
Well, Poe, why do you have two user names here? Isn't that sort of cheating the 2 per week rule? I've read Henry's poetry and thanks, I'll stick to my own voice.
— Isabelle5
I have two user names because my other one was blocked. Worry not...I'll not be exceeding your 222 poems anytime soon. I can't even access my other account.
— Poe
I am Henry le Rennet by the way.
— Poe
Shoot, I don't care if you have 100 user names, I am not the site owner! Welcome back, hope you had a good summer.
— Isabelle5
My summer was simply great.
— Poe
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