yes it's linked in the forum, but i've read a goodly many of your poems, and there are some real short real goodly ones that are way goodlier than this, dirty dog.
clanliness is next to goodliness
Yes, it's supposed to get commented just as you see best.
I have to joke, though, you know me:
you opened with *gak. Sir! the correct term in American, is "gag".
Works both ways. UGH. (thank ye! for visiting and having a taste, ha ha!)
gay network sound bite
Tonto means Stupid in Spanish - is that what you were going for?
Lone Ranger, kimosabe Isabelle. Tonto is his sidekick, loyal.
Chuck, there is no promotion of homos here. Just to make them more visible
so that people remember that most all of them look and act and talk just like,
for instance, your dad or your uncle Filbert. It must be hard to tell a poofter
in England where the accent tends to make all men seem just a bit more colourful
than Yanks consider Prudence.
PS: If anyone cares to give Tonto a "10", it would mean so much to him,
inasmuch as Asian derivatives tend to be about five or six at best. Be kind
and do not lift the loincloth bonnet hind; he's no rear engined injun. Tanks for guffaws.
The Native American League of Decency has already sent me a cease and desist letter. It reads, UGH.
Yes, I know all about the Lone Ranger but it's fun that tonto also means stupid.
Your title should be Wooden Indian.
lift loin cloth
lift loin cloth
High Ho Silver!
^ haha ^
"meanwhile, back at the ranch, tonto had cleverly disguised himself as a door. in rode the lone ranger, quickly alit, ran up and"
tonto is wayuh maypo weafs pway
Isabelle, thanks. I am yet unconvinced, but shall give your title a hard try.
TITLE CHANGE on 05 sept from "UGH." to "Wooden Indian". Let's run this up the flagpole and see now who salutes?
PS: thanks for every Chuckles. Laughter is our best medicine, man.
i think its better you keep the first line as the title.
and tonto pronto - the poem.
Me no like,
When your back was to wall
Tonto turn it round
When you bent to find soap
Tonto was your friend
When you fell of horse
onto to Tonto
he no mind
Now you make full
Once you were fool
So, you think, trochee, that it may be best to go back to the way it was?
What comes from lifting a gay Apache's loincloth?
?? time and censors Wm. Tell
Naah. i meant :
Title:What comes from lifting a gay Apache's loincloth?
; Tonto pronto
I think you'd be best to tuck this one back in its loincloth, jiggle it around a bit then pop it out again in a few months time renewed, refreshed and hopefully, a lot funnier.
BTW trochee's suggestion is a joke.
I think for that the original title must be restored.
It's a two liner joke with poetic sound, for kids, and UGH is part of the shock and humor.
I'm a kid, you see. NAH, it must stay out and be considered one of my "best" little things.
And many people won't like it, I understand that. I want them to tell me so, too.
I really appreciate the frank replies. Blind without you. Thanks.
I really mean that: it is such a help to hear frank and real replies.
If you hate something or it makes you squirm, good.
If I can do that in a few words which even a grade school kid would laugh at,
great! And if it's not really "dirty" ((it is not )) then, we come to examine our own comfort zones and learn more about ourselves, etc. Sometimes my replies come off as snide but I guess what I really mean is: thank YOU for being so honest about your feelings. Ugh. I've never known a hung indian.
netsie you need to chill.
What comes from lifting a sapphic woman's loincloth?
what comes from lifting an y eastern womans loins
What comes from lifting a Muslim woman's veil?
Certain death at the hand of her (bisexual) Muslim brother