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peter christian kierkegaard wept for what his brother could not
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the lacklustre tale
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of an issac
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who was smart enough
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to shut the fuck up
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for mankinds sake
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true wisdom drew
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its maiden breath
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in the secret the boy kept
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from sarah's anxious eyes
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me, i am
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the poet mentioned
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i see the scheme;;;
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the spectrum left to right
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and never white
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my responsibility long-
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accepted because
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i know what birthed
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the shake in peter's hand
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as he signed away his rights
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as the break in isaac's
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voice as he pleaded
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to his creator on moriah
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soren read genesis
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and paused in debate
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at isaac's fate
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peter read on searching:
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what of the fucking ram?
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5 Sep 08


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