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True Account Of The Voyage of Orion (1783)
larrylark

Be sure you come from the east,
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looking to the lee side, for a reef lies
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two miles off shore, which tore out
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the rear of "The Donegal" and all
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fittings therein. Bring her no closer
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than a sight of land, through faint wind
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where there is sandy ground
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beneath three fathoms, for this is unlike
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the shores of Devon, being shallow; the sea lies
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low as a fallow field, yielding treachery
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to the unwary. You must not mistake
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Naird's point, in shape a devil's crook
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from where you must look to strong currents.
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Bring her without hurry south south east,
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at least half a turn into a westerly breeze,
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easing out in the direction of Guinea.
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Do not free the slaves till anchored,
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or they will likely sin against the crew.
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Keep them stored and under the gun,
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maintaining frugal rations.
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Last voyage, in a run of good fortune,
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only nine were dead, four from the lash.
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Two hundred and seventy three
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sold as seen on deck. Do not enter
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into burial arrangements as that
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might prove costly. Hurry to turn her round
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and when the anchor frees, drag out those
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whose souls have departed,
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and throw them where they will be lost to the sea.
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12 Sep 08

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nice poem. has your humor but is well told regardless.

my only wonder is why the last line is extended so. seems it can do with a few words cut out; maybe exchange the last four words for lost at sea.

just my thought. like the parenthesis; good tactic, you've used multiple times and with your signature i might add.
 — listen

Hi Listen

this is my account of the horrors of the slave trade as seen throuhg the eyes of a captain experienced in shipping live traffic from Africa to the plantations of the Americas
 — larrylark

Hi steelman

Thanks for the advice which i shall consider in due course
 — larrylark

nice.
 — unknown

Thanks

Larry nice Lark
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