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Nickle for a toe, ten nickles for the whole set.
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Weigh them, shine them, put them in a glass case.
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Toe nails and a hammer, pound it all
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against the wall of your skull!
 4
What loverly decorations you've got in there.
 5
What a view from the windows!
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18 Oct 08

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almost mindless nonsense and workable, but you keep throwing these glances at us trying to see if we 'get it'. you could simplify this into a nice little rhyme and it would live forever. this one is just rapping paper.
 — geckodrome

i love women's toes so i have to give you a 10 and a favourite for this.
 — raskolniikov

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