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dreamcircaoct08
hank

iwas
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scaredad
 2
youhadfallenoffacliff
 3
yousaiditwasgood
 4
better
 5
actually
 6
thenisawyouturnintoalion
 7
changefromfallingto
 8
confidentlygrasping
 9
thecliff-face
 10
sendingashowerofsmallrock
 11
yousenteverythingaway
 12
withaheadsway
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(that'swhatiremembermost
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iunderstoodthensafeandstrong
 15
andgoinginwithrespect)
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snarling
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24 Oct 08


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i'm not so sure what you were trying to do with this, it's an interesting concept to have everything blur into itself, but it's pretty difficult to read that way.  i ended up going through it to decode it, and then having only looked for the words, i lost the story.
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