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hank
| iwas | 1 |
scaredad | 2 |
youhadfallenoffacliff | 3 |
yousaiditwasgood | 4 |
better | 5 |
actually | 6 |
thenisawyouturnintoalion | 7 |
changefromfallingto | 8 |
confidentlygrasping | 9 |
thecliff-face | 10 |
sendingashowerofsmallrock | 11 |
yousenteverythingaway | 12 |
withaheadsway | 13 |
(that'swhatiremembermost | 14 |
iunderstoodthensafeandstrong | 15 |
andgoinginwithrespect) | 16 |
snarling | 17 |
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24 Oct 08 |
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i'm not so sure what you were trying to do with this, it's an interesting concept to have everything blur into itself, but it's pretty difficult to read that way. i ended up going through it to decode it, and then having only looked for the words, i lost the story.
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