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sixfirstsenses
hank

yourpulse
 1
mymetronome
 2
 
 
yourpulse
 3
mymetronome
 4
 
 
youpulse
 5
mymtometer
 6
 
 
yourpulse
 7
mymetronome
 8
 
 
youpulsate
 9
memetogether
 10
 
 
yourpulse
 11
mymetronome
 12

mym,meme,words.

29 Oct 08

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why not? it's wording and it's sort of arty and more decorative than the auto-obituaries most people post here.
 — geckodrome

whynotexactly.thanksgecko.loveyourname.
 — hank

you can see them, can't you? at the geckodrome? all crawling all over the ceiling while the referees sit at the sidelines waiting for a team to form?
 — geckodrome

yes.
 — hank

funny, how words translate
funny how, keyboard for the moment
suits you.
 — sir_I_clan

mesmeric rhythm which needs close reading to fully appreciate

i like
 — Mongrol

first sense was one of the first things i read/commented on on this website.
it came up as a random, as i recall. it led me to read all your poems, and led another person to the tattoo parlour. this one is a kinda cool tribute to it, and i think in a way you're lucky to have a busted keyboard.
  
 — chuckle_s

Panto

Myme
 — unknown

NICETOHEARFROMYOUALL
 — hank

???  What does this even mean?  I don't get it.  
 — unknown

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