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biding
hank

themountainsarehigh
 1
andtowalkupthemtakes
 2
abreathaway
 3
thestreamsthatrundownthem
 4
areclearseethroughredsandgreens
 5
cominghereandthere
 6
inthosehillsthestreamsareeverywhere
 7
therocksaresettledasifthey'vegrownthere
 8
therocksprovidetheblack
 9
becausethesun
 10
andthewindbreezesacrossthewatersurface
 11
dancersiswarring
 12
smell?notinastrongwind
 13
thoughyoucanalwaysgetoutofit
 14
towaitforyoursuperior
 15
mountainstreamsandcolors
 16

3 Nov 08

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Any particular reason you do not want space?  It's VERY hard to read.  

Line 3 a breath?  Not your breath?

You need white space.  
 — Isabelle5

somehow I can ready this easily. Maybe it's living close to the mountains.
 — SarahMichele

ready = read. I've got a head cold.
 — SarahMichele

i dont get a bang out of your spaceless poems
but for me this works.
i enjoy clambering up 1-11.
having said so, problem is,
(as i like typing a p r e y i n g  m a n t i s)
i dint get no payoff.

you have some disdain for something?, but i dont know what it is.
and why the whiplash from love?
 — gnormal

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