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Andro Tax: in love with my god; anticipating one of two outcomes.
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i. DEAR GOD, I LOVE YOU. come over to my holding hand:
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thank you for th' brain before my nerves. good favors for the string in my fingers
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i have been allowed to feel th greatest sadness, thank you my lord, for keeping me lonesome between my ears, without any other.
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thank you for th compass, now i am unmoving and happy, also without any other. i suggest that i will die th same way, so be it
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i have thought about suicide, i nearly became resolved
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ii. when a woman touches my belongings i feel very nice,
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i think women are beautiful things,
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never been comfortable bein called she
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don't want long hair, except if it is on my lover
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i love their lotions but not in my own hands, to be beside them while they groom, a thing i do not understand
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i expect that i will grow into a gentleman
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10 Nov 08


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