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fer alex, my friend
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alex, th silver flea,
 1
th beige music note
 2
ambiguous.
 3
got a soul like a
 4
puffa cigrette smoke
 5
from between two tooths
 6
got skin like a lumberjack
 7
gotta handsome laugh
 8
got women on th mind
 9
got a man's appetite
 10
i like your breasts, like your spine
 11
i hate every word of yr book
 12

10 Nov 08

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I wanted to hate this for its wretched confidence in its nonsense but actually, I like. Love the last 2.
 — GWH

I dig this, its sick, i like a lot of your stuff
 — aForA

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