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fer alex, my friend

alex, th silver flea,
th beige music note
got a soul like a
puffa cigrette smoke
from between two tooths
got skin like a lumberjack
gotta handsome laugh
got women on th mind
got a man's appetite
i like your breasts, like your spine
i hate every word of yr book

10 Nov 08

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I wanted to hate this for its wretched confidence in its nonsense but actually, I like. Love the last 2.
 — GWH

I dig this, its sick, i like a lot of your stuff
 — aForA