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yeti
hank

iambegging
 1
now
 2
forthesuntocome
 3
butmyheadislisting
 4
yetidon'tdiscourage
 5
 
 
theremaybesomething
 6
itellmyselfstill
 7
 
 
still
 8

11 Nov 08


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yeti... as in cocaine?  ha.
 — unknown

no.
 — hank

yetyoudon'tdiscouragewhat?  Why do I have to read this without spaces?  Aside from the play on yeti?
 — technomancer

love the whole package.
i got it.
but i dont the purpose of 1 2 and 3 except to say its late.
 — gnormal

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