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stepping toward satori, pt. 2
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thanksgiving morning
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i have like a pain in my
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back i cant get out
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wondering how many times
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i'll have to bite my tongue today
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i like being taken by surprise
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when my thoughts wrestle me down
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where i can write my poetry
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with the lines i blur of the ceiling
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as im coming back to consciousness
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on my back
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i used to want to learn
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a bird from the call it makes
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but the other day i heard one
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just mocking some song she
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heard on the radio
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so i dont trust them fuckers
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so many ideas
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unfleshed like if i
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peeled the skin off my finger
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to the bone
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but i fell too far into myself this year
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to be worried enough to tell any of you
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27 Nov 08

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