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ondogsandchildren
hank

ihappywithoutdisturbances
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or
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ialwaysenjoytheirdisturbances
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but
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iamalso
 5
stillinmytrainingstage
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itakeprecedent
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overdogsandchildren
 8
yousurprisedmewithher.
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30 Nov 08

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i really like this!
 — unknown

Mental, joyful.
 — GWH

who is her?
 — gnormal

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