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a dangerous few words for two people too few
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Where dying is ecstasy --
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(I've dipped my finger into it;
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tempted it; had a figment face ask me,
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do you wish to know it now?
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and it is always an answer 'no'
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not even from my lips, not even from my own mind --
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from somewhere unknowable;
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where a force unseen and quiet
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knows my fate, can see over the great unholy horizon)
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-- living lets say, living
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is mostly dragging heels, and I understand how a man
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could become a liar.
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How else will he rub himself against wet cunt
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-- in this age of isolation -- ?
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-- in a room of twice-fertilized women -- ?
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except to say 'Call me Ishmael,'
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to the supposed intellect, the poet
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who couldn't even quote Dylan (myself, I was seen
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to be a liar, but it was careless
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to open my mouth and then
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to keep it closed when asked to prove it)
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so he rows around the library
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with his mouth full of another man's words.
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Liar, you do not read, you covet.
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Liar, you have no original tongue.
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Liar, I have conspired against you
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both sexually and intellectually.
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Come with us poets into the ink sea
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where ugly women do not frighten men
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because the lungs are filled with dust and ink
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and the loins are always red and throbbing!
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Come, liar! Come in with your long blonde hair
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(you think this makes you look ambiguous)!
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Come in with your forced haughty dialect
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(you have been practicing for years)!
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Come in with your sexless woman,
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your literature major and your poor grammar!
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Come in with your lies of novel-writing
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and do not mention the book I wrote for you!
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Please, this book I've written could have revived my corpse,
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but Ashley, great white wonder! -- let it be my death!
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Let it be the violin in my eye!
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21 Dec 08

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amazing
 — onklcrispy

hi ho
 — onklcrispy

Amazing piece of poetry. WOW!
 — psychofemale

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