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test 1
hank

is not your life a test?
 1
and what is any reason
 2
not to welcome it?
 3
Tests, i mean, can not
 4
you do your best, faced
 5
before any godly hurdle
 6
or disguised mathematics?
 7
with joy because you are human
 8
and simply, Can?
 9

16 Jan 09


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i fucking hate it, get rid of it!
 — unknown

why?
 — hank

in simple words.
 — hank

take a breath. and tell it in your style/words.
 — hank

no?
then i'll go over to my blog.
 — hank

Oh hold on i was reading it back to front, sorry. I love it
 — unknown

wow, let me read it back to front.

Can?
simply and human
are you because joy?
with mathematics disguised
or hurdle godly?
any beforefaced best your do?
you not, can mean I?
tests it.
welcome.
to not reason.
'any', is What?
and test a life?
you
are
not
is.
 — hank

dont do that! its shit again, i hate it , i hate it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 — unknown

I like the backward version
 — syrossoul

i dont hate it.
i like it.

what you been reading?
 — gnormal

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