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first snow
SkaaDee

someone drew
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on each neighbour's lane,
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a heart in the snow.
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I strolled and found families
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and loners
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gathered around tubes
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inside each home
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with swirling blues
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like the curator
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of this unsuspecting zoo.
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the hearts were lit
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by horizon light against cloud.
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I did meet one other -
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a passing car
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and it was dark
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yet someone drew hearts.
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every house
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every lane
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mine just the same.
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20 Jan 09

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wow.
amazing
 — unknown

fascinating and special.
 — unknown

tis is a street observer?with nothing to do?
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A very lovely, heartfelt poem.  nice work.
 — PaulS

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