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lcd vs. wood
hank

my technology sits next to my fire
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a mirror in between each
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a struggle to illuminate
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in similar footcandles
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the mess i've left between them
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1 Feb 09

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i like the idea, but as yoko would say (and often does) in my head, "i dont feel anything."
 — gnormal

i think the glow-in-the-dark
mess is out in the market.

in which case:
synthetic vis-a-vis natural.

as if vis-a-vis were vs.
: )
 — fractalcore

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