hummm... j.g. let there be others .. brave enough after jermulie goeszon to read this... 1, 2 were a nice start... for me... after that the piece fell... it could be the a.m. though... 4 a.m. i have always felt... that every piece should have it's day or night... critiqued... even by a novice... at least you have heard something to chew on...j.g. — goeszon
this poem is gay — unknown
Thank you most kindly Hank. Hope you are well and having a fine time — larrylark
I strive for perfection but never achieve it. I think life is like that, chasing after dreams that dissolve before our eyes as we reach them — larrylark
I hope it made you as happy and gay as snowdrops which dance like pretty little fairies underneath the toadstools at the bottom of my garden — larrylark
Beautiful. I love your evocative poem almost as much as I love snowdrops. I like the way you take this away from the pastoral with line 6 and then bring us back to nature at the end.
Line 8 I particularly like this line, with clever use of "frieze".